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Bac oral Espaces et échanges
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je passe mon oral d'anglais dans une semaine. J'ai rédigé la deuxième notion pour le Bac. Si vous pouviez m'aider à la corriger et me dire ce que vous en pensez ce serait super sympa de votre part. Toute correction ou conseil serait le bienvenu. Je vous en remercie à l'avance pour votre aide.
I am going to present you the notion « Spaces and exchanges ». I am thus going to define the notion. The exchange it is the movement of people or goods between countries thanks to the immigration, the tourism and the business. The interactions and the exchanges through the borders became easier and faster. We are thus entitled to wonder : In what had the various waves of immigration an impact on the American society nowadays? To approach this question, I am going to develop my opinion through three points: First of all we shall see the reasons of this immigration then we shall speak living conditions of the immigrants and we shall eventually speak consequences of this immigration.
The United States of America of today it is 42,08 million immigrants that is 13 % of the population. The main reason is that America is presented as a country of asylum accessible to all those who hope to build up themselves, by their work and their audacity, a new life. It is the idea that we are made of America. A country where each has a chance: the American dream
The conditions of the immigrants are not still good. For example, in the book The Tortilla Curtain, we face two clandestin characters, América and Candido, who have a miserable life. This text tells us the story of Candido, a clandestine Mexican who living in California with his partner América is knocked by the car of Delaney. The young Mexican will not wish conscript the police or the ambulance by fear to be returned in Mexico. Indeed, we know that the obtaining of a definitive resident's permit is very difficult to get itself, what suggests us the presence of numerous illegal immigrants on the American territory.
The result of this wave of immigration was the creation of diverse foreign communities of origin. The latter allowed the construction of the cities of the USA and they gave their life for their new countries. We can perceive nowadays various districts such as Chinatown or Harlem who group diverse ethnic groups.
Even if at first the immigrants were badly accepted, they managed to give way in this country which became theirs. They allowed the construction of an American company(society) the origins and the diversified cultures.
Besides as said Franklin Roosevelt: « Remember you, remember you forever, that each of us, you and I in particular, come down from immigrants and from revolutionaries. »
Bonjour
je passe mon oral d'anglais dans une semaine. J'ai rédigé la deuxième notion pour le Bac. Si vous pouviez m'aider à la corriger et me dire ce que vous en pensez ce serait super sympa de votre part. Toute correction ou conseil serait le bienvenu. Je vous en remercie à l'avance pour votre aide.
I am going to present you the notion « Spaces and exchanges ». I am thus going to define the notion. The exchange it is the movement of people or goods between countries thanks to the immigration, the tourism and the business. The interactions and the exchanges through the borders became easier and faster. We are thus entitled to wonder : In what had the various waves of immigration an impact on the American society nowadays? To approach this question, I am going to develop my opinion through three points: First of all we shall see the reasons of this immigration then we shall speak living conditions of the immigrants and we shall eventually speak consequences of this immigration.
The United States of America of today it is 42,08 million immigrants that is 13 % of the population. The main reason is that America is presented as a country of asylum accessible to all those who hope to build up themselves, by their work and their audacity, a new life. It is the idea that we are made of America. A country where each has a chance: the American dream
The conditions of the immigrants are not still good. For example, in the book The Tortilla Curtain, we face two clandestin characters, América and Candido, who have a miserable life. This text tells us the story of Candido, a clandestine Mexican who living in California with his partner América is knocked by the car of Delaney. The young Mexican will not wish conscript the police or the ambulance by fear to be returned in Mexico. Indeed, we know that the obtaining of a definitive resident's permit is very difficult to get itself, what suggests us the presence of numerous illegal immigrants on the American territory.
The result of this wave of immigration was the creation of diverse foreign communities of origin. The latter allowed the construction of the cities of the USA and they gave their life for their new countries. We can perceive nowadays various districts such as Chinatown or Harlem who group diverse ethnic groups.
Even if at first the immigrants were badly accepted, they managed to give way in this country which became theirs. They allowed the construction of an American company(society) the origins and the diversified cultures.
Besides as said Franklin Roosevelt: « Remember you, remember you forever, that each of us, you and I in particular, come down from immigrants and from revolutionaries. »
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I am going to present you the notion "Spaces and exchanges" (use quotation marks). I am thus going to define the notion. Exchange (you don't have to say exchange it is..)is the movement of people or goods between countries thanks to the immigration, tourism and the business (when using the article 'the' you are referring to a particular thing). The interactions and the exchanges through the borders became easier and faster overtime. We are thus entitled to wonder : In what ways has the various waves of immigration impacted the American society? To approach this question, I am going to develop my opinion through three points: First of all we shall see the reasons of this immigration then we shall speak about the living conditions of the immigrants and we shall eventually speak about the consequences of this immigration.
The United States of America today has about 42.08 million immigrants that is 13 % of the population. The main reason is that America is presented as a country of asylum accessible to all those who hope to build up themselves, by their work and their audacity, they can attain a new life. It is this idea that makes up the back bone of America. A country where each person has a chance to be successful: the American dream.
However, the conditions of the immigrants are still not good. For example, in the book "The Tortilla Curtain," we face two clandestine characters, América and Candido, who have a miserable life. This text tells us the story of Candido, a clandestine Mexican who, living in California with his partner América, is knocked by the car of Delaney. The young Mexican will not wish to be conscripted to the police or the ambulance for fear of being returned to Mexico. Indeed, we know that the obtaining of a definitive resident's permit is very difficult to get,hence the result is the presence of numerous illegal immigrants on the American territory.
The result of this wave of immigration was the creation of diverse foreign communities of different origin. The latter allowed the construction of the cities of the USA and they gave their life for their new countries. We can perceive nowadays various districts such as Chinatown or Harlem who group diverse ethnic groups.
Even if at first the immigrants were badly accepted, they managed to have their way in this country which became theirs (became their home). They allowed the construction of an American company(society) from different origins and diversified cultures.
Besides as said Franklin Roosevelt: "Remember you, remember you forever, that each of us, you and I in particular, come down from immigrants and from revolutionaries."
Note: keep up the good work
The United States of America today has about 42.08 million immigrants that is 13 % of the population. The main reason is that America is presented as a country of asylum accessible to all those who hope to build up themselves, by their work and their audacity, they can attain a new life. It is this idea that makes up the back bone of America. A country where each person has a chance to be successful: the American dream.
However, the conditions of the immigrants are still not good. For example, in the book "The Tortilla Curtain," we face two clandestine characters, América and Candido, who have a miserable life. This text tells us the story of Candido, a clandestine Mexican who, living in California with his partner América, is knocked by the car of Delaney. The young Mexican will not wish to be conscripted to the police or the ambulance for fear of being returned to Mexico. Indeed, we know that the obtaining of a definitive resident's permit is very difficult to get,hence the result is the presence of numerous illegal immigrants on the American territory.
The result of this wave of immigration was the creation of diverse foreign communities of different origin. The latter allowed the construction of the cities of the USA and they gave their life for their new countries. We can perceive nowadays various districts such as Chinatown or Harlem who group diverse ethnic groups.
Even if at first the immigrants were badly accepted, they managed to have their way in this country which became theirs (became their home). They allowed the construction of an American company(society) from different origins and diversified cultures.
Besides as said Franklin Roosevelt: "Remember you, remember you forever, that each of us, you and I in particular, come down from immigrants and from revolutionaries."
Note: keep up the good work