Résumé/ mémoire

Bonjour,
pouvez-vous m'aider à corriger mon résumé de mémoire s'il vous plait?
Merci pour vos réponses.
This memory deals with of my project of final civil engineering studies that I realized within the company xxx.
This is to build a two-storey car park (compose of seven half levels) in xxx near to the railway station.
This is a separate market. X is the incumbent of macro lot B01 : Structural work , sealing, structural steel , pain

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Résumé/ mémoire

Bonjour,
pouvez-vous m'aider à corriger mon résumé de mémoire s'il vous plait?
Merci pour vos réponses.
This memory deals with of my project of final civil engineering studies that I realized within the company xxx.
This is to build a two-storey car park (compose of seven half levels) in xxx near to the railway station.
This is a separate market. X is the incumbent of macro lot B01 : Structural work , sealing, structural steel , paint, vertical walls , floor paint , signage , aluminum front , facade , wood sluices , wood decking , walking, wood , metalwork plumbing
As an assistant engineer work, the tasks entrusted to me were the preparation, organization and monitoring of the site. Through missions carried out. I was a guarantor of quality, time, and costs.
Merci d'avance à celui ou celle qui se penchera sur mon texte.

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This memory deals with on my project of final civil engineering studies that I realized within the company xxx. 
This is to build a two-storey car park (compose of seven half levels) in xxx near to the railway station. 
This is a separate market. X is the incumbent of macro lot B01:Structural work, sealing, structural steel, paint, vertical walls, floor paint, signage, aluminum front, facadewooden sluices, wood decking, walking, wood, metalwork plumbing.

As an assistant engineer work, the tasks entrusted to me were the preparation, organization and monitoring of the site. Through missions carried out. I was a guarantor of quality, time, and costs.

Il y a seulement 2 fautes ! 

Bonne continuation ! ;)