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The son of man is masterpiece , a painting created in 1964 by the belgian surrealist painter rené magritte.The painting mesure 118 on 88. She is painted with oil painting. She is composed of two planes. On the faregroung there is a man. He wearing a red tie in her white shirt and a black jacket.In the head he wearing a b

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Bonjours j'ai un oral a la rentré en anglais , il faut que je parle d'une œuvre pourriez vous corriger mes erreurs pour que je puisse apprendre svp ,merci beaucoup!

The son of man is masterpiece , a painting created in 1964 by the belgian surrealist painter rené magritte.The painting mesure 118 on 88. She is painted with oil painting. She is composed of two planes. On the faregroung there is a man. He wearing a red tie in her white shirt and a black jacket.In the head he wearing a black hat.The man is standing in front a stone wall.In the backround there are a blue sea and the sky is cloudy.The man's face is hidden with green apple.It looks the apple float in air.There are many dark colors , a black , grey...There is not much light, it's remind me of feeling sad.This works of art is link two painting. The listenning bedroom by Magritte, he represents a big green apple in a bedroom, the same a painting the son of man.There is also a painting 'The great war fronts' (La grande guerre facades).This is a same background , there is a woman.She wearing a white dresse she takes umbrella.The woman's face is hidden with purple flower.I chose a painting because Magritte he love mystery. The apple conceals the face of man.We do not know the face of man. I love mystery same magritte

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A masterpiece *
Measure *
A la place de "in the head" dis plutot: "On his head ,he's wearing a black hat"
Tha man is standing in front OF * 
A * green apple 
It looks like the apple is floating in the air *
Enlève le A devant black :) et dit plutot: "for example: dark.. grey.."
"There is not much light" ,j'aurai dis plutot: "There is not a lot of light" 
Ensuite pour le "it's remind me of feeling sad" c'est mieux: "That reminds me the sadness" "the same a painting" 
Tu as voulu dire quoi par : "This worl of art is link two painting" "the listening bedroom" ?
Après c'est: "This is THE same background"  
Dress (sans le E)
"she takes umbrella" tu voulais dire qu'elle prend ou elle tient ?
hidden with a puple flower *
Tu as voulu dire quoi "I chose a painting because Magritte helove mystery"
I love mystery like magritte *